Writing Retreat 2026, days 3–5

Concentric star trails

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Wednesday

Wednes­day was rainy and cool. I did some edit­ing on the paper print­out of There’s Noth­ing Good at the Top, and fin­ished read­ing Julian Com­stock by Robert Charles Wil­son and start­ed Fear­less Jones by Wal­ter Mosley. I also dis­cov­ered that Far­go is avail­able to me on the TV, and so I watched the first few episodes of sea­son 1.

Thursday

Thurs­day was a bet­ter day; the sun came out and the tem­per­a­ture cracked the mid-teens. I wore shorts when I walked over to Poor Michael’s book empo­ri­um, where I had a mocha and picked up some books for a friend (I have enough books of my own, thanks). Back at the house I entered my edits from the paper man­u­script into my doc­u­ment, and made a few more updates. I still need to add a few scenes and update a few dream sequences, I think; make a few things more explic­it. The first draft is you telling your­self the sto­ry[1]As Sir Ter­ry Pratch­ett put it., but by the time it’s a sec­ond draft (which is what I’m work­ing on) it should be ready for oth­ers to read it too.

The sky was still clear after the sun went down, and it’s quite dark ’round these parts, so I set up my cam­eras in the yard, one fac­ing north and one point­ing pret­ty much straight up. The north-fac­ing one got about 2½ hours worth of 5‑second expo­sures for star trails (above); the oth­er one snapped a bunch of 30-sec­ond expo­sures of the Milky Way. I made time-lapse videos from both sets of photos.

The Milky Way (and the International Space Station)
The Milky Way

Friday

That actu­al­ly bled into Fri­day; all the pho­tos were tak­en before I went to bed at about 1am, but all the pro­cess­ing hap­pened today. I’ve also read some more, and I plowed through all of sea­son 1 of Far­go too, which told a taut story.

And now I’m going to have some sup­per, and then work some more on my edit­ing. Tomor­row I have to be up ear­ly, so it’s prob­a­bly for the best that it’s cloudy and rainy—I’ll be less tempt­ed to try and get more night­time photos.

Series: Writing Retreat 2026

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2026, day 2; Writ­ing Retreat 2026, days 3–5.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
↑1 As Sir Ter­ry Pratch­ett put it.

Writing Retreat 2026, day 2

Panoramic view of the Milky Way at Spruces

Yes­ter­day I chopped words from a 3350-word sto­ry till it was under 2500 words. I read it over today, and it’s still got the heart of the sto­ry in it. I’ll give it anoth­er look in a few days and see if I’ve missed anything.

Today I read about a dozen chap­ters in Julian Com­stock by Robert Charles Wil­son. I’m into the final sec­tion and I’m still not sure how this is going to end.

I also con­tin­ued edit­ing the paper man­u­script of There’s Noth­ing Good at the Top. There are a num­ber of things I need to add in there, and the list is grow­ing. (It’s fine; as they say, writ­ing’s re-writing.)

After sup­per I head­ed to Wasagam­ing to snap a short time­lapse of the sunset.

I also got a panora­ma of the sun­set sky.

panoramic view of the sunset at Wasagaming

After that, I con­tin­ued on to Spruces, where the clouds stayed away from the shots I want­ed of the Milky Way.

The Milky Way at Spruces
5-image stack of the Milky Way

Back at the house, I set up for some quick star trails (and got a bonus shot of the Big Dipper).

Star trails from the front porch of the house
The Big Dipper from the front porch

And now it’s just past mid­night, and I’m going to go to bed. (That’s one thing about doing this retreat in mid-Sep­tem­ber rather than July or August; I don’t have to stay up till 1 am to get prop­er­ly dark skies.)

Update: It appears that, if I’d stayed up anoth­er hour or two, I might have caught some hori­zon-hug­ging auro­ra last night. Ah well, so it goes.

Series: Writing Retreat 2026

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2026, day 2; Writ­ing Retreat 2026, days 3–5.

A shadow on the moon

The moon, slowly being covered by Earth's shadow

I set up on the deck last night for an hour or so to get the lunar eclipse.

Full size (about 7MB)

The images in the panora­ma above were tak­en at 2‑minute inter­vals (with occa­sion­al adjust­ment to the cam­er­a’s aim). They’re all 250mm, f/5.6, and either 1/100s, ISO 100 (the cres­cents) or 1s, 200 ISO (the rud­dy disks).

Since I was already out there, and the sky was clear, I set up my 2nd cam­era, point­ing straight up, to get some star trails. (And satel­lite tracks aplen­ty, some irid­i­um flares, and maybe a very small mete­or or two.)

Star trails, as seen from my deck

This one’s made up of ~630 images, each 11mm, f/2.8, 5s. (I did­n’t check the ISO on these, but I’d guess it’s in the 100–400 range.)

The Galaxy, August 21, 2025

The Milky Way above a prairie horizon

Last night I found myself on Road 81W about half a mile south of High­way 16. I had my cam­era and my tri­pod, so I thought, Well, why not? Why not take some shots of the Milky Way?

The head­er image, above, is a sin­gle shot of the galaxy above the prairie horizon.

This is a panoram­ic pho­to, nine pho­tos, rough­ly 3×3, to cap­ture more of the height of the galaxy than I could with any sin­gle image.

Panoramic photo of the Milky Way

And this is an 11-image stack of a por­tion of the galaxy, which hope­ful­ly brings out some of the detail bet­ter than any sin­gle shot could.

A portion of the Milky Way (stack of 11 images)

Info for Nerds

All images were 30 sec­ond expo­sures at 11mm, f/2.8, ISO 3200.

I merged[1]Use the “Light­en Only” mode, Pat, for future ref­er­ence. 10 dark frames into a sin­gle “dark mas­ter”[2]Sounds Sith, but it ain’t. to elim­i­nate or at least lim­it hot pix­els in the images. The Image Mag­ick com­mand composite {image}.jpg -compose minus_dst {dark-frame}.jpg {image}_cleaned.jpg is how I did the dark frame subtraction.

The align­ing and stack­ing was done with tools from Hug­in Panora­ma Tools[3]Hug­in is part of Panora­ma Tools, appar­ent­ly. and Image Mag­ick—align_image_stack *.jpg -a aligned_ to align the images, then mogrify -format jpg *.tif to con­vert the TIFF files to JPEG, most­ly so my com­put­er isn’t bog­ging down try­ing to process huge image files.

The panora­ma was cre­at­ed with Hug­in—my luck with align­ing night-time panora­mas with Hug­inn is hit-or-miss, but I find it gen­er­al­ly can find enough con­trol points in a group of Milky Way shots to do its magic.

…I should just make a page about all that, should­n’t I. A ref­er­ence for my own use, if no one else’s.

Series: Writing Retreat 2025

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2025; Stayed up late again; The Galaxy, August 21, 2025.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
↑1 Use the “Light­en Only” mode, Pat, for future reference.
↑2 Sounds Sith, but it ain’t.
↑3 Hug­in is part of Panora­ma Tools, apparently.

Stayed up late again

Star trails at Spruces - about 90 minutes

I think it was worth it, even if a thun­der­storm woke me up ear­ly this morning.

I shot at Spruces for about an hour and a half, and met a cou­ple who had stopped in on their way from Bran­don to Dauphin. (Hi, Doms & Debs, if you’re read­ing this!)

Here are a cou­ple time­laps­es, one of the Milky Way float­ing above Clear Lake and anoth­er of the stars wheel­ing across the sky.

Series: Writing Retreat 2025

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2025; Stayed up late again; The Galaxy, August 21, 2025.

The Milky Way at an abandoned church

The Milky Way behind an abandoned church

Last night the sky was clear and my bat­ter­ies were charged. I loaded up my gear and head­ed to a spot I found last fall: an aban­doned church south of me.

For almost the entire time I was there—about 10:45pm till 2am—it was just me and the fire­flies and the crick­ets. A truck drove by at one point (very slow­ly, because I’d seen them com­ing and turned on my car’s lights), but oth­er than that I was alone under the stars.

The Milky Way behind an abandoned church

Look at all those fireflies.

I did up a mul­ti-pho­to panora­ma, too, before I left.

Panoramic image of the Milky Way behind an abandoned church

Below is a time­lapse of the night. It’s made of 169 still images, each one a 30-sec­ond expo­sure at 11mm, f/2.8, ISO800.

It was almost 3am by the time I got to bed. It’s been a while since I stayed up that late. I think it was worth it, though.

Update

I just spent 90 min­utes or so stack­ing 16 images from my 2nd cam­era into this image of a por­tion of the galaxy.

A stack of 16 images of the Milky Way

Birthday Aurora

Panoramic photo of the aurora

Yes­ter­day was my birth­day, and the sky was clear and the auro­ra data were pret­ty good. So about 10pm I hit the road, and got these pho­tos about 15 min­utes from my house.

Above: an 11-pho­to panora­ma stretch­ing from west to east.

The stars were sharp and clear, too, in the cold air, so I snapped some pho­tos of one of my favourite con­stel­la­tions, Orion.

And because my cam­eras were nice and still for most of the time, I have a minute or so of time­lapse video for you. Each sec­ond of video is a minute of real time.