Writing Retreat 2025

fountain pen on notepad

This year I’d like to:

  • Get some or all of a first draft on “What’s Done is Undone”
  • Sub­mit some­thing to Augur and/or Tales & Feathers
  • Get out in a kayak a cou­ple times[1]It looks like the weath­er might coop­er­ate.
  • Ride my bike dai­ly, even if it’s just around the cab­in area
  • Con­jure up a clear night or two for some Milky Way pho­tos or star trails
  • Read a cou­ple books
  • relaaaaaaaax

My “week” is a lit­tle trun­cat­ed this year—I’ll be here for 5½ days, roughly—but I’m plan­ning to make the most of it.

Head­er pho­to by Aaron Bur­den on Unsplash.

Series: Writing Retreat 2025

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2025; Stayed up late again; The Galaxy, August 21, 2025.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 It looks like the weath­er might cooperate.

As if in a dream

fountain pen on notepad

I had a dream the oth­er night that I was writ­ing a sto­ry about a tow­er, a wood­en tow­er like you find in nation­al parks at scenic out­looks, but every step on it was a day. If you came down the stairs too quick­ly you’d find your­self back in time.

When I woke up I held onto it, tweaked it, made it more log­i­cal. I’ve start­ed on a first draft, because a gift in a dream is still a gift.

The tow­er had three hun­dred and six­ty-five steps, but one of them—it was nev­er clear to me which one—was about 25% high­er than the rest. My best friend Riley, who went miss­ing for a week and a half in the sum­mer­time and then showed up claim­ing he’d tripped on the way back down from the top, told me over pie and black cof­fee in the Chick­en Chef that I should always watch my step.

On the tow­er,” I said, “or everywhere?”

Every­where, but espe­cial­ly on the tower.”

Writing Retreat 2024: 6

15-image panorama of a group of 4-5 trees at the edge of a cultivated field

Anoth­er day, anoth­er bike ride. This was about 16km, and start­ed at the cof­fee shop, where I noticed I was that weirdo who wears a Slaugh­ter­house-Five T‑shirt but reads Blue­beard.[1]A Von­negut book is a Von­negut book, though.

Then I noo­dled around town for a bit, and out into the coun­try­side, where I took pho­tos of a tree…

A tree at the edge of a field; the focus is very tight on some of the branches, and everything else is weirdly blurred
ah, Lens­ba­by

…and some hydro lines.

Five hydro wires overhead, and a shot down the row of hydro poles supporting them
pow­er to the people

Then back into town, where I saw—

Look, I know some of you can’t wait for Pump­kin Spice Cable-Knit Sweater time, but I’m not ready to let go of sum­mer yet. So this lit­tle clus­ter of yel­low leaves felt par­tic­u­lar­ly cru­el, at least to me.

A cluster of yellow leaves among the summer-green leaves of a tree; the focus is very tight on the yellow leaves, and everything else is very blurred
I’m not ready

Ah well. So it goes, as Kurt Von­negut[2]Full cir­cle. would say.

Series: Bike Ride Photos

The entire series: Down by the riv­er; Bike ride birds; The ex-gar­den and the weir; Snap­shots of a ride; Across Town; Black­bird; North Hill cam­pus; Lilacs and coun­try roads; A pop of colour; Back lane flow­ers; More Breniz­ers; The riv­er is high; A bird and a reflec­tion; Rideau Park; Writ­ing Retreat 2020, Day 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2020: The Num­bers; Storm dam­age, sun­flow­ers; Eleanor Kidd gar­dens; Scenes from today’s ride; All right, autumn can be pret­ty; Bike ride, April 10, 2021; Bike ride wildlife; Bike ride, May 16, 2021; Some flow­ers for you; Lilacs; Under the bridge; A fence, a tree, and the sky; Tur­tle Cross­ing; Ceme­tery crit­ters; On Reflec­tion; Week­end rides; Upon Reflec­tion; Deer and paparazzi; Sep­tem­ber Bike Ride; Corn & Sun­set; On Reflec­tion: Oct. 1st; Autumn Trees; A bit of graf­fi­ti; Novem­ber bike ride; Geese; Day 30; Quack quack; Skin­ny deer; Mon­day bike ride; Sat­ur­day snaps; Deer + Flow­ers; Bike Ride — July 17, 2022; The mead­ow; It seems to be autumn; Por­tal fan­ta­sy; Sla­va Ukrai­ni; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Thurs­day bike ride; Bike Ride, May 20, 2024; Shy; Cana­da Day ride; A long ride; Cook­ie Ride redux; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End; Bike Ride, Sep. 22, 2024; Today’s Ride — Oct. 6, 2024; Souris Val­ley; Bike Ride Pho­tos — May 19, 2025; Bike ride, May 24; Art in the trees.

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 A Von­negut book is a Von­negut book, though.
2 Full cir­cle.

Writing Retreat 2024 (4)

A bison standing in the enclosure, pretty much ignoring me

Yes­ter­day’s big thing was a 20-km bike ride. I took my cam­era along and snapped a cou­ple pho­tos; the bison up above and the sign­posts below, which remind­ed me of the Wat­son Lake sign­posts we saw on our trip, decades ago, to Yukon.

A collection of signs, with place names and distances ("Whitehorse 3080km" pointing roughly northwest, "Orlando 3456km" pointing roughly southeast, etc)
Inter­est­ing selec­tion of locations

I also fin­ished read­ing “The Meta­mor­pho­sis”, and it was, well, Kafkaesque[1]As you’d expect..

Today’s plan: writ­ing some sec­tions of one of my sto­ries; read­ing some Blue­beard by Kurt Von­negut (I’m about 5 chap­ters in and he’s got some inter­est­ing things to say about art; I also won­der if Michael Swan­wick lift­ed a few names[2]Like “Mintouch­i­an” and “Gre­go­ri­an”. from the book for char­ac­ters in his nov­el Sta­tions of the Tide), and prob­a­bly anoth­er bike ride, since the weath­er seems sim­i­lar to yes­ter­day. I need to inflate my bike’s rear tire, though, before I go.

And if it’s clear tonight, as the fore­cast sug­gests it should be, I think I’ll gath­er up my cam­eras and tripods and go find a big, open sky with a Milky Way or oth­er night­time delights.

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 As you’d expect.
2 Like “Mintouch­i­an” and “Gre­go­ri­an”.

Writing Retreat 2024 (1)

I'm sitting in the dark under a plastic palm tree, lit by Christmas lights, holding up a 1988 Canada Winter Olympics glass with about an ounce or so of Scotch whisky in it—cheers!

What did I bring to this year’s writ­ing retreat?

  • 12 Man­i­to­ba beers
  • 2 lap­tops
  • 2 cam­eras
  • 2 tripods
  • more food than I need
  • not the cof­fee grinder, whoops
  • my bike
  • an assort­ment of books
  • a hope that the fore­cast is incor­rect and at least one night will be cloud-free

And now I’m about to start cook­ing sup­per, fin­ish­ing off the quite bit­ter[1]At least it’s got cool can art, by GMB Chomichuk. A Nec­es­sary Evil (which is def­i­nite­ly an IPA), and plan­ning out tonight’s writ­ing. (Ghosts? You bet. Star­ships? Absolutely.)

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 At least it’s got cool can art, by GMB Chomichuk.

The “The Two Seasons” incident

Janky text that spells out "You wouldn't properly license copyrighted material for a provincial English exam"

This morn­ing, on the radio, the very first news sto­ry I heard was about how the provin­cial Eng­lish exam got post­poned[1]Or can­celed, who knows. because they had, to use Man­i­to­ba Edu­ca­tion’s words, “an issue regard­ing nec­es­sary per­mis­sions to use mate­ri­als.” And I laughed.

Con­tin­ue read­ing “The “The Two Sea­sons” inci­dent”

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 Or can­celed, who knows.

Goals, Nov. 2023

Aurora borealis above evergreens

Hoo boy, I haven’t done one of these in a while.

  • Attack NaNoW­riMo, though I don’t think I’m going to go for 50,000 words
  • If the weath­er and space weath­er per­mits, get out for some auro­ra photos
  • Set a good exam­ple for my mentee

Yep, I’m a men­tor again. Good luck to us both.

Writing Retreat 2023: Friday

Star trails and a thunderstorm

Well. I did­n’t real­ly keep up with post­ing about my retreat, did I now.

I was at the cab­in for a week, Fri­day to Fri­day, with a cou­ple days off in Win­nipeg for my mom’s birth­day. The weath­er was gen­er­al­ly pret­ty grey, though it warmed up on Thurs­day enough for me to take my one and only kayak ride. (It was love­ly, but windy, so the lake was a bit choppy.)

Thurs­day night, final­ly, the sky was most­ly clear. There was a thun­der­storm far, far off to the north; I could see the flash­es, but I could­n’t hear the thun­der at all.

The Big DipperThe Big Dipper (with lines)

I also snapped pho­tos of Jupiter and all four Galilean moons, and Sat­urn (I think I even caught a bit of the ring).

Series: Writing Retreat 2023

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2023, day one; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Thurs­day bike ride; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Fri­day.

Writing Retreat 2023, day one

Semicircular star trails in a sky made a bit grey by smoke haze; a tree is in the foreground on the left

I moved in to the cab­in Fri­day evening—laptop, sleep­ing bag, cam­eras, bike, and food—and got set­tled in. I read for a bit[1]Cur­rent read: Shades of Grey by Jasper Fforde, which is pret­ty trip­py so far. and checked the fore­cast. The evenings this week look pret­ty cloudy, so I’m not sure how much astropho­tog­ra­phy I’ll get to do. Last night was clear, though, so I decid­ed to head on out about 10pm.

I got set up at the Wasagam­ing dock just before 11 and snapped about 30 min­utes’ of star trails. I dis­cov­ered lat­er that the cam­era was­n’t quite as lev­el as I’d hoped, so I end­ed up crop­ping out the thin line of the lake, but the tree on the left made a nice fore­ground. (See the pho­to above.)

After that I head­ed to Spruces, and set up one cam­era for anoth­er round of star trails…

Semicircular arcs of star trails above a dark lake

…while the oth­er one was des­ig­nat­ed for Milky Way photos.

It was a good start to the week, I think.

Goals

What I’d like to do with my week:

  • write (aim­ing for 10,000 words, let’s say, in two projects: Praise the Torch When ‘Tis Burned[2]aka “Derelict star­ship + ghosts” and The Slow Apoc­a­lypse[3]aka “Wiz­ard v. War­head”.
  • pho­tog­ra­phy
  • read a bunch
  • bike rides (aim­ing for 5–10km a day, weath­er permitting)
  • kayak­ing (at least twice, again, weath­er permitting)
  • cel­e­brate my mom’s birthday

Hold my calls, I’ll be at the cabin.

Series: Writing Retreat 2023

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2023, day one; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Thurs­day bike ride; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Fri­day.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 Cur­rent read: Shades of Grey by Jasper Fforde, which is pret­ty trip­py so far.
2 aka “Derelict star­ship + ghosts”
3 aka “Wiz­ard v. Warhead”

Writing Goals: November 2022

fountain pen on notepad

I’m doing NaNoW­riMo this year, sort of. Instead of push­ing hard for 50,000 words in a brand-new project, I’m going to use the month to try and fin­ish the first draft of Dried Flow­ers. My aim is at least 300 words each and every day. So far today I’m at 307 words, and I think I’m going to do a bit more after I fin­ish this post.

I’ll try to make sure to post update here every so often (let’s say week­ly, so I’m not bor­ing you).

Wish me luck!