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Review: Fragment, by Craig Russell

Fragment, by Craig Russell

Fel­low Bran­don author Craig Rus­sell recent­ly had a new nov­el pub­lished, titled Frag­ment. I went to the book launch at McNal­ly Robin­son Book­sellers and bought myself a copy.

I fin­ished read­ing it last night, and I must say, I enjoyed it. It’s a short novel—not much over 200 pages—but it packs a lot into that space.

The Story

Thou­sands per­ish as ice over­runs a research/tourism base at the south end of the world. A mas­sive sheet of Antarc­tic ice—the Fragment—breaks free of the con­ti­nen­tal ice shelf and drifts into the ocean. Three sci­en­tists, sur­vivors from the destroyed base, must try to get the mes­sage out: This is a dis­as­ter. The Frag­ment threat­ens thou­sands, pos­si­bly mil­lions, of lives.

Stand­ing in their way is the cap­tain of the nuclear sub­ma­rine that res­cued them, under orders to run silent, run deep. Also, the Pres­i­dent of the Unit­ed States isn’t thrilled about the sit­u­a­tion, since it looks like it’ll be bad for his polls in the run-up to re-election.

And Ring, a blue whale, tries to warn his peo­ple of the dan­gers pre­sent­ed by the Frag­ment. But he’s only one voice in the vast ocean.

The Good

The sto­ry is cap­ti­vat­ing. Rus­sell1 does a good job of flesh­ing out his cast of char­ac­ters, espe­cial­ly the ones we’re going to spend a lot of time with. Ring in par­tic­u­lar felt like a well-devel­oped per­son, who just hap­pened to be a whale.

The stakes start out high and get high­er all the time. I could­n’t stop turn­ing pages, espe­cial­ly in the last half of the book, which I read in a sin­gle sitting.

The “Needs Improvement”

The end­ing, while com­pelling, felt like it could be fleshed out some­what. Sev­er­al dis­as­ters involv­ing the Frag­men­t’s unstop­pable force vs. an island’s immov­able object were deliv­ered in a few para­graphs, and it felt rushed.

The Verdict

Buy it. Read it. It’s an eco-dis­as­ter nov­el with polit­i­cal over­tones, and it’s a first-con­tact nov­el, all in 200-and-a-bit effi­cient pages.

 


  1. Craig is a friend of mine, and it feels weird to call him by his last name, but that’s the way things are done. Right? 

I’m not made of stone

Of course I opened it.

Along with my col­lec­tion of six Very Short Sto­ries, these are the works in Word-o-Mat’s Edi­tion #1:

  • Three poems by Hen­ry King
  • Help Want­ed” by Luke Hilton
  • Three poems by Diana Dupu
  • North of Real­i­ty” by Uel Aramchek
  • The Rental Heart” by Kirsty Logan

Infor­ma­tion about all the authors may be found on the Word-o-Mat website.

Word-o-Mat!

It has final­ly arrived.

I’m not ready yet to slit that seal, though.

Wait, what’s Word-o-Mat?

Word-o-Mat is an art project that aims to sell pack­ages of short sto­ries from a repur­posed Wurl­itzer cig­a­rette vend­ing machine in Malmö, Swe­den. I have six very short sto­ries includ­ed in issue #1.

Flash Fiction commentary

So I’m par­tic­i­pat­ing in the NYCMid­night Flash Fic­tion Con­test, and I’ve just received the judges’ feed­back on my first piece, “The Overnight Shift”.

What the judges liked about your story

Excep­tion­al­ly clever blend of mod­ern urban ele­ments with fan­ta­sy. Robert is such a lik­able char­ac­ter that by the end I don’t even mind his decep­tive treach­ery. The twist is fun­ny, unex­pect­ed, and thor­ough­ly enjoyable.…

Humor­ous dia­logue, espe­cial­ly with the demon and the human. The imagery of the cof­fee was vis­cer­al and imaginative.…

I liked how you incor­po­rat­ed dia­logue in your sto­ry. Your char­ac­ters’ per­son­al­i­ties shone through with the dialogue.…

What the judges feel needs work

The cen­tau­r’s speech is some­what out of place. He seems like a bit of an arche­type, more archa­ic than the oth­er crea­tures, espe­cial­ly against the rest of the fan­ta­sy races who seem well-inte­grat­ed. His use of “art thou” is an exam­ple of when his speech seems par­tic­u­lar­ly out of place. If this char­ac­ter is meant to be dif­fer­ent from the oth­ers in terms of his inte­gra­tion, the read­er may need more cues to read him this way.…

There’s a lot of intro­duc­tion of char­ac­ters that don’t feel like they are nec­es­sary to the sto­ry. Also because of the anachro­nis­tic ele­ments (men­tion­ing Wikipedia and Poke­mon Go), I’m hav­ing trou­ble get­ting a sense of place and how rules work in this fan­ta­sy world. Also…why are they let­ting faun chil­dren play in a garbage dump? If that’s okay, why are there 3 of them on duty? If you’re going to have relaxed work­ers, you must have a con­trast­ing mil­i­tant one, so we under­stand the rules. Also, more show­ing, less telling. We should see the rain­bow, not hear about it.…

Make sure that each inter­ac­tion between your char­ac­ters is mean­ing­ful. With short sto­ries, every word counts. Each scene has to con­nect to each oth­er some­how, or at least move the sto­ry forward.…

I’m glad they enjoyed it. I’ll cer­tain­ly take their cri­tiques into con­sid­er­a­tion as I pol­ish it up for submission…

Writing retreat, 2016 edition

For the last week of July, I left my home and invad­ed our friends’ cab­in at Minnedosa. My goals were to get 10,000 new words writ­ten in Trans­la­tions, along with a week­end’s worth of a flash fic­tion sto­ry for a con­test, and try my hand at pho­tograph­ing the Milky Way. 

Great suc­cess. 

I man­aged to get the flash sto­ry done in the time allot­ted, and reviews in the forum are very pos­i­tive. One day I plan to try to sell it. 

I also man­aged to a aver­age about 2,000 words a day from Mon­day to Fri­day, usu­al­ly in two shifts of 1,000 words each. I wrote pret­ty much entire­ly on the deck. It was glorious. 

I did­n’t get the Milky Way. But I got this…

Aurora at Minnedosa
…so let’s call it even. 

Also, I indulged in some lake kayak­ing, swim­ming, and read The Bone Clocks by David Mitchell, which I expect I’ll review lat­er, once I’ve digest­ed it a bit more. 

Good times. Same time next year, I hope.