Writing Retreat 2024: 7

The Milky Way

Last night I was set­tled in, ready to just watch a bit of TV and then go to bed, when my dar­ling wife texted me:

If the skies are as clear there as they are here, you need to go outside.

So I stepped out onto the patio and yes, yes it was pret­ty clear here. I gath­ered up my cam­eras and tripods and hit the road.

I set up on a grav­el road not too far from town—if I want to, I could prob­a­bly bike there—and snapped a few sets of Milky Way pho­tos. With the 11–16mm lens, I was shoot­ing ten-minute batch­es of 30 sec­ond frames, 11mm, f/2.8, with the ISO chang­ing each ten min­utes: 400, 800, and 1600. I want­ed to see what I could get from the dif­fer­ent ISO settings.

Unfor­tu­nate­ly the dew crept onto my lens—or, more pre­cise­ly, the UV fil­ter I have screwed on over the lens. If I was smart, I’d have removed the fil­ter and re-done my shoot­ing; I think now it was the fil­ter hold­ing in a bit of heat that caused my dew prob­lems.[1]Appar­ent­ly the sim­ple hack for dew is to wrap a cou­ple hand warm­ers around the lens; you can hold them in place with tape or a beer cozy. Filed away for lat­er exper­i­men­ta­tion.

I man­aged to get two stacks from the ISO 1600 run, and they look pret­ty good, I think. One is 8 images deep, and the oth­er is 10.

The Milky Way, an image made from a stack of 10 photos
A lit­tle dew on the lens fil­ter makes this a glam­our shot
The Milky Way, an image made from a stack of 8 photos
The image is fair­ly sharp, because I had just cleaned the dew off the lens filter

I also got a stack of 18 images from the ISO 400 run, and… Well, you can judge for your­self, but I think ISO 1600 is the sweet spot between “detail” and “noise” (at least for me). Maybe ISO 800 would work, if I can keep the lens from mist­ing over…

The Milky Way, stack of 19 images at ISO 400. The photo is pretty dark, and there's not a lot of detail.
It’s quite a bit dark­er, even with dou­ble the images in the stack

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 Appar­ent­ly the sim­ple hack for dew is to wrap a cou­ple hand warm­ers around the lens; you can hold them in place with tape or a beer cozy. Filed away for lat­er experimentation.

Writing Retreat 2024: 6

15-image panorama of a group of 4-5 trees at the edge of a cultivated field

Anoth­er day, anoth­er bike ride. This was about 16km, and start­ed at the cof­fee shop, where I noticed I was that weirdo who wears a Slaugh­ter­house-Five T‑shirt but reads Blue­beard.[1]A Von­negut book is a Von­negut book, though.

Then I noo­dled around town for a bit, and out into the coun­try­side, where I took pho­tos of a tree…

A tree at the edge of a field; the focus is very tight on some of the branches, and everything else is weirdly blurred
ah, Lens­ba­by

…and some hydro lines.

Five hydro wires overhead, and a shot down the row of hydro poles supporting them
pow­er to the people

Then back into town, where I saw—

Look, I know some of you can’t wait for Pump­kin Spice Cable-Knit Sweater time, but I’m not ready to let go of sum­mer yet. So this lit­tle clus­ter of yel­low leaves felt par­tic­u­lar­ly cru­el, at least to me.

A cluster of yellow leaves among the summer-green leaves of a tree; the focus is very tight on the yellow leaves, and everything else is very blurred
I’m not ready

Ah well. So it goes, as Kurt Von­negut[2]Full cir­cle. would say.

Series: Bike Ride Photos

The entire series: Down by the riv­er; Bike ride birds; The ex-gar­den and the weir; Snap­shots of a ride; Across Town; Black­bird; North Hill cam­pus; Lilacs and coun­try roads; A pop of colour; Back lane flow­ers; More Breniz­ers; The riv­er is high; A bird and a reflec­tion; Rideau Park; Writ­ing Retreat 2020, Day 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2020: The Num­bers; Storm dam­age, sun­flow­ers; Eleanor Kidd gar­dens; Scenes from today’s ride; All right, autumn can be pret­ty; Bike ride, April 10, 2021; Bike ride wildlife; Bike ride, May 16, 2021; Some flow­ers for you; Lilacs; Under the bridge; A fence, a tree, and the sky; Tur­tle Cross­ing; Ceme­tery crit­ters; On Reflec­tion; Week­end rides; Upon Reflec­tion; Deer and paparazzi; Sep­tem­ber Bike Ride; Corn & Sun­set; On Reflec­tion: Oct. 1st; Autumn Trees; A bit of graf­fi­ti; Novem­ber bike ride; Geese; Day 30; Quack quack; Skin­ny deer; Mon­day bike ride; Sat­ur­day snaps; Deer + Flow­ers; Bike Ride — July 17, 2022; The mead­ow; It seems to be autumn; Por­tal fan­ta­sy; Sla­va Ukrai­ni; Writ­ing Retreat 2023: Thurs­day bike ride; Bike Ride, May 20, 2024; Shy; Cana­da Day ride; A long ride; Cook­ie Ride redux; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End; Bike Ride, Sep. 22, 2024; Today’s Ride — Oct. 6, 2024; Souris Val­ley; Bike Ride Pho­tos — May 19, 2025; Bike ride, May 24; Art in the trees.

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 A Von­negut book is a Von­negut book, though.
2 Full cir­cle.

Writing Retreat (5b — Aurora Borealis)

Panorama of last night's aurora, west to east

It was quite a night.

Con­tin­ue read­ing “Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis)”

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Writing Retreat (5a — Milky Way)

Milky Way image -- stacked from 23 images

There was quite the auro­ra show last night, and I’m going through my pho­tos from that, but first I decid­ed to process the 24 shots I took of the Milky Way. Two hours’ pro­cess­ing gets you the above photo.

Milky Way photo -- straight out of the camera, no processing appliedMilky Way image -- stacked from 23 images
it takes a lot of work to look this good

The Process

I took some notes as I processed the images, because I want to do more of this and get bet­ter at it. The image, as eye-catch­ing as it is, is pret­ty noisy, and I’m pret­ty sure there are bet­ter ways to do some of the things I did. But, for the nerd crowd (I know you’re out there, I can hear you breath­ing), here’s how I made this par­tic­u­lar image:

  • snapped 24[1]One frame was wonky, so the final stack is 23 images deep. pho­tos (aka “light frames”), 15 sec­onds, 24mm, f/2.8, ISO 3200
  • snapped 3 dark frames, ie, left the set­tings the same and put the lens cap on
  • did dark frame sub­trac­tion on every frame (opened each light frame and a dark frame in Gnu IMP as lay­ers, dark frame on top, and set the Lay­er Mode to “Sub­tract”)[2]This gets rid of the cam­er­a’s “hot pixels”—the first time I tried stack­ing the images, I got smeary blue and red lines from the hot pix­els.
  • align images with align_image_stack -a aligned_ *.JPG [3]Part of Hug­in.
  • con­vert aligned images to JPG using mogrify -format jpg *.tif[4]part of Image Mag­ick. (most­ly so I don’t over­load my poor laptop)
  • open aligned images as lay­ers in Gnu IMP
  • set each lay­er mode as “Dodge”
  • export­ed the whole she­bang as a JPG
  • re-opened the export­ed JPG
  • Used Gnu IMP’s Fil­ter → Enhance → Noise Reduc­tion and cranked that baby up to 11 [5]16, actu­al­ly.
  • prof­it

Things to try next time:

  • shoot RAW
  • try a low­er ISO value

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 One frame was wonky, so the final stack is 23 images deep.
2 This gets rid of the cam­er­a’s “hot pixels”—the first time I tried stack­ing the images, I got smeary blue and red lines from the hot pixels.
3 Part of Hug­in.
4 part of Image Mag­ick.
5 16, actu­al­ly.

Writing Retreat 2024 (4)

A bison standing in the enclosure, pretty much ignoring me

Yes­ter­day’s big thing was a 20-km bike ride. I took my cam­era along and snapped a cou­ple pho­tos; the bison up above and the sign­posts below, which remind­ed me of the Wat­son Lake sign­posts we saw on our trip, decades ago, to Yukon.

A collection of signs, with place names and distances ("Whitehorse 3080km" pointing roughly northwest, "Orlando 3456km" pointing roughly southeast, etc)
Inter­est­ing selec­tion of locations

I also fin­ished read­ing “The Meta­mor­pho­sis”, and it was, well, Kafkaesque[1]As you’d expect..

Today’s plan: writ­ing some sec­tions of one of my sto­ries; read­ing some Blue­beard by Kurt Von­negut (I’m about 5 chap­ters in and he’s got some inter­est­ing things to say about art; I also won­der if Michael Swan­wick lift­ed a few names[2]Like “Mintouch­i­an” and “Gre­go­ri­an”. from the book for char­ac­ters in his nov­el Sta­tions of the Tide), and prob­a­bly anoth­er bike ride, since the weath­er seems sim­i­lar to yes­ter­day. I need to inflate my bike’s rear tire, though, before I go.

And if it’s clear tonight, as the fore­cast sug­gests it should be, I think I’ll gath­er up my cam­eras and tripods and go find a big, open sky with a Milky Way or oth­er night­time delights.

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 As you’d expect.
2 Like “Mintouch­i­an” and “Gre­go­ri­an”.

Writing Retreat 2024 (3)

The Milky Way, with a couple large spruce trees in silhouette on the left

It was clear last night, so off I went to Rid­ing Moun­tain to get some Milky Way pho­tos. I shot a cou­ple of panora­mas, one just off the high­way on the golf course / Wish­ing Well turnoff, the oth­er at Spruces (thanks again, Tim!).

As I was leav­ing, thin clouds had start­ed to roll in, and the moon—still half-full—was ris­ing in the east. 

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Writing Retreat 2024 (2)

Daisies in the Squirrel Hills

This morn­ing, I went out to Squir­rel Hills—about 10 min­utes’ dri­ve from the cab­in; I could prob­a­bly bike it—to watch a friend start off in a 40km race. After he was off, I took a few pho­tos, since I’d nev­er been to the Squir­rel Hills before. It seems like a nice lit­tle place.

This evening, after sup­per, I pulled my weird lit­tle Lens­ba­by lens out of its bag and snapped a few pho­tos in the last hour or so of daylight.

In between, I worked on the out­line of the sto­ry I’m work­ing on this week, clean­ing it up and refresh­ing my mem­o­ry on the large-scale struc­ture I’m hop­ing for. I think I even have an end­ing for it now, which is nice[1]The end­ing isn’t nec­es­sar­i­ly nice, but it’s nice to have an end­ing, a tar­get I can aim at..

And now, since the sky is clear and the fore­cast does­n’t look promis­ing for the rest of the week, I’m about to stay up late and try for some Milky Way pho­tos. Don’t wait up!

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 The end­ing isn’t nec­es­sar­i­ly nice, but it’s nice to have an end­ing, a tar­get I can aim at.

Writing Retreat 2024 (1)

I'm sitting in the dark under a plastic palm tree, lit by Christmas lights, holding up a 1988 Canada Winter Olympics glass with about an ounce or so of Scotch whisky in it—cheers!

What did I bring to this year’s writ­ing retreat?

  • 12 Man­i­to­ba beers
  • 2 lap­tops
  • 2 cam­eras
  • 2 tripods
  • more food than I need
  • not the cof­fee grinder, whoops
  • my bike
  • an assort­ment of books
  • a hope that the fore­cast is incor­rect and at least one night will be cloud-free

And now I’m about to start cook­ing sup­per, fin­ish­ing off the quite bit­ter[1]At least it’s got cool can art, by GMB Chomichuk. A Nec­es­sary Evil (which is def­i­nite­ly an IPA), and plan­ning out tonight’s writ­ing. (Ghosts? You bet. Star­ships? Absolutely.)

Series: Writing Retreat 2024

The entire series: Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (1); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (2); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (3); Writ­ing Retreat 2024 (4); Writ­ing Retreat (5a — Milky Way); Writ­ing Retreat (5b — Auro­ra Bore­alis); Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 6; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: 7; Writ­ing Retreat 2024: The End.

Foot­notes

Foot­notes
1 At least it’s got cool can art, by GMB Chomichuk.