Writing Retreat 2017

The Office -- writing at my friends' cabin

As is rapid­ly becom­ing tra­di­tion, I spent most of the last week of July in a friend’s cab­in up at Minnedosa. (Thanks, Karen & Ed!) My goals for the week are post­ed here, and here’s how it went:

Beat sheets for the major characters in Translations

I have a com­plete out­line for the POV’s arc, which is the most crit­i­cal as it’s nar­rat­ed in the first person.

Also, I had a major epiphany about the POV char­ac­ter, one that will shake up the last ⅔ of the book.

10,000 words in Translations

I wrote 12,500 words in Trans­la­tions, the bulk of it writ­ten as I sat on the deck, pret­ty much all alone in the cot­tage area.

At least a few shots of the Milky Way

Yeah, that turned out okay.

The Galaxy

Hav­ing access to a car this year real­ly helped me get to the dark places (lit­er­al­ly) so that I could get some great pho­tos of the night sky.

Also, I sold a print of one of my pho­tos to a friend. (Thanks, Bri­anne!) Does that mean I’m a pro now?

Lots of bike riding

Well. My bike’s left ped­al arm has been com­ing loose more and more fre­quent­ly. It’s got to go into the shop. On my first ride in Minnedosa, I had to stop twice to tight­en the ped­al arm, both times on my way up a hill. So after that, feh to bike rid­ing. (At least, my bike in its cur­rent condition.)

For­tu­nate­ly, I had access to a kayak (thanks, Car­la!), so I put in about 15 km of pad­dling time, going up and down the lake.

Stretch goals

I read James S. A. Corey’s amaz­ing Leviathan Wakes, cour­tesy of my pub­lic library’s e‑book pro­gram. I’m now hooked, and need to read the rest of the Expanse saga.

I also re-read the first ⅔ of Gene Wolfe’s sub­tle and mys­te­ri­ous The Fifth Head of Cer­berus, which, I’m not gonna lie, prob­a­bly had at least a lit­tle bit to do with my afore­men­tioned epiphany. (It’s also the first Wolfe nov­el I’ve re-read, and it’s amaz­ing how much less con­fu­sion I feel, how much more I’m pick­ing up.)

And we bought a sec­ond car, which is why I could have a vehi­cle to go gal­li­van­tin’ around the coun­try­side, look­ing for dark loca­tions to get pho­tos like this:

The Galaxy

I think that went well.

Save

À la prochaine, Minnedosa

And thus ends the 2017 writ­ing retreat. I’ll have a more detailed post lat­er, but the pré­cis is that I wrote 12,500+ words in Trans­la­tions, had an epiphany that will change the last third of the sto­ry, took a bunch of pho­tos, and drank a lot of iced cof­fee at Chip­per­fields as I used their wifi (much as I am right now).

Oh, and we bought a car.

Good times.

The Office

The Office -- writing at my friends' cabin

For the next week, at least. It’s time for Writ­ing Retreat, 2017 Edition.

So far I’ve got 3,500 words of a 10,000+ word goal. (1,000 words of that is in an outline/beat sheet, so I’m not real­ly count­ing them. I’m also not count­ing blog posts. That seems like it’d be cheating.)

 

Copyright and Theft

Read Time to Fix Canada’s Copy­right Mis­take on Medium.

It’s a tricky top­ic, and I’m by no means expert in it, though I like to think I’m a decent­ly-well-read enthu­si­ast. I’ve actu­al­ly had my stuff “appro­pri­at­ed” for edu­ca­tion­al pur­pos­es (one day I’ll have to write a longer post about it, but for now here’s the Coles Notes ver­sion, sans the angst and irri­ta­tion I felt at the time).

My day job, which sup­ports my writ­ing habit, is at a uni­ver­si­ty, and so I know the appeal of not pay­ing for things, since bud­gets are tra­di­tion­al­ly tight, even under the most small‑l lib­er­al of governments.

Cana­da does indeed need to address its copy­right issues.

 

Opening line

Open­ing line for a new 850-word flash fic­tion piece:

Alice, star­ing up at the rip­pling green sky, said, “Make a wish.”

 

Definitions

For a scene in my cur­rent work in progress, I want­ed to know what the prop­er term is for the skull­cap worn by bish­ops in the Catholic Church. So I Googled arch­bish­op skull­cap, as you do.

The word is zuc­chet­to. It comes from the Ital­ian for … Pump­kin. (Because, appar­ent­ly, the lit­tle caps—worn to keep the bish­ops’ heads warm—reminded peo­ple of pump­kins cut in half.)

I end­ed up going with “arch­bish­op’s skull­cap” in the manuscript.

Prairie​ Comics Festival

I went today to the Prairie Comics Fes­ti­val. Recon­nect­ed with some writer friends (Chad­wick, Sam, and Jamie), made some new con­nec­tions (hi, Donovan​), and regret­ted not bring­ing along my busi­ness cards (at least three peo­ple asked about Word­Press stuff).

But I picked up a bunch of local art, so at least there’s that.

  • Mini Book of Mon­ster Girls by Autumn Crossman
  • Eggman Colour­ing Book #1 by Gabrielle Ng
  • How to be Human by Kath­leen Bergen
  • Street Style  Samu­rai by Jamie Isfeld
  • Those Who Make Us with short sto­ries by Chad­wick Ginther and Corey Redekop, among others
  • Win­ter­peg by Matthew Dyck
  • Spacepig Hamadeus by Dono­van Yaciuk
  • The Rangeroads  by Court­ney Loberg

I look for­ward to a lot of reading. 

Story Generator

The page bills itself as The Best Sto­ry Idea Gen­er­a­tor You’ll Ever Find, and when it dis­pens­es gems like this:

Have your char­ac­ter attend a themed cos­tume par­ty where they can’t find the per­son that invit­ed them, they know nobody else, and the peo­ple they meet are alter­nate­ly hos­tile and friend­ly. What is the strange theme of the cos­tumes, and does your char­ac­ter stay or run after a dis­as­ter happens?

…it’s hard to call that an exaggeration.

Head­er image cour­tesy Unsplash.