Ten years later, this still makes me chuckle.
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Dark Sky—Riding Mountain

I went up to Riding Mountain for the Lights Out event.
My friend Tim was camping up there, too, so I went up a bit early and stopped in to see him. We went elk bugling—a birthday tradition of his—but the elks weren’t having any of it. Oh well.
After that I went to the park in Clear Lake, where the lights were well and truly out. It was dark enough that, more than once, I nearly stepped on someone because I couldn’t see them. Perfect conditions!
First I snapped some Milky Way shots. This one’s my favourite:

Then I set up for some star trails. I set my timer for an hour, set my camera to take 15-second exposures, and sat down on a bench to listen to my shutter click.
After seven minutes, the lights came back on. Sodium lights, too, so it washed out everything, making the trees and the beach look orange.
So the header photo is 7 minutes’ worth of Earth’s rotation, instead of the hour I was hoping for. Oh well. It still turned out pretty good, I think.
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Something upcoming

A couple lines from my getting-closer-to-completed first draft of Translations:
General Armitage gave me an amused look. “Oh, but you’re not Daniel Snyder,” he said. He held up a photo of my father: “This is Daniel Snyder.”
—me
Header photo by Aaron Burden on Unsplash.
Mom’s birthday bash

For my mom’s very recent birthday, we got together at Hecla, a couple hours north of Winnipeg. I’ve posted most of the photos on Facebook, but Mom doesn’t have a Facebook account.
Crib games is serious times. Kathleen takes a quick break from advising G. on her crib hands. I. in the hammock. C. down at the quarry beach The first (?) lighthouse at Hecla. Gramma leaning on the mermaid rock. I. doing a callback to an earlier, legendary photo. Sue and G went off exploring, but I have a long lens. The family down at the beach near the old lighthouse. They call it “Sunset Beach”. They call it “Sunset Beach”. C decided he needed a swim at Sunset Beach. C swimming in the twilight. Cropped shot of the Moon, at 250mm. Star trails at the beach at the Lighthouse Inn. 20 second exposures x 85. All three of us, with Mom.
No meteors

I went out to try to get some meteors during the 2018 Perseid shower, and I don’t think I captured a single one. (I saw two, but they were where my camera wasn’t pointed.)
But at least I got some nice star trails, on a dark and moonless night, despite the smoke in the air.
Write, edit, submit

…repeat.
I took a 3,700-word story that’s accumulated about 12 rejections so far, trimmed it down to a bit more than 2,900 words, and sent it off tonight. Wish me luck!
Eventually, there might be a Swanwick/Link interview

…and it’s sort of my fault.
It started with a request for book suggestions: Nikki was looking for books that “captured [my] soul”.
I made a suggestion, naming a couple of my favourite short-story authors. (FYI, Kelly Link goes by @haszombiesinit on The Twitters.)
Michael Swanwick, as is his wont, replied.
Kelly Link for sure. Also Jeffrey Ford and Andy Duncan. Astonishing writers all three.
— Michael Swanwick (@MichaelSwanwick) August 1, 2018
I offered up my 2‑year-old review of Get in Trouble.
Mr. Swanwick agreed with me.
I feel the same. Not sure she makes ’em up on the fly. But I’ll admit to having no idea how they’re created.
— Michael Swanwick (@MichaelSwanwick) August 1, 2018
Kelly Link chimed in.
And then it all kind of snowballed.
Someday, with your permission, it would be interesting to interview you about how, step by step, you created one particular story.
— Michael Swanwick (@MichaelSwanwick) August 2, 2018
I’ll make a note to do that when I can free up the time. It’ll be a few months, though.
— Michael Swanwick (@MichaelSwanwick) August 2, 2018
So I’ve got that to look forward to. I hope it comes to pass; I think it’d be a fascinating interview.
Wrap-up
My goals for my writing retreat, 2018 edition, were pretty simple:
- Get at least 10,000 words written in Translations, preferably more like 12,500.
- Do some astrophotography and just general photography.
- Do some kayaking and bike riding.
How’d I do?
At the start of the week, my novel sat at 65, 968 words. As I write this, I’ve just crossed the 80,000–word mark. So I managed 14,055 new words in this first draft. I’m happy with that—especially considering that I essentially took Friday off from writing.
Also, I got a pile of photos taken. I had hoped for some good shots of the Milky Way, but the moon was nearing full, so the skies were too bright for that. I did get a couple nice star-trail shots, though.
Star trails above a pond and field, near Minnedosa, MB. Star trails above what appears to be an abandoned house A sunflower looks back at me, while all the rest face the sun I think these might be chokecherries, but I’m not sure enough to try and eat them. Bison at Minnedosa A bit of a light show, between Minnedosa and Erickson As the sun set, it lit the clouds to the east.
I also went to Winnipeg, for Chadwick’s book launch, and had a lovely chat in the evening with Mike & Michelle, a couple friends I haven’t seen in a long time.
As far as kayaking—well, the weather didn’t cooperate. It was consistently around 20°C here this week, which is a bit chilly to go out on the lake. It’s supposed to hit 27 or 28 Monday, but by then I’ll be back at the office. I did go for a few bike rides, which was nice, and as I write this on Sunday, I’m planning one more before I pack up and leave.
So, on the whole, I’m going to call Writing Retreat 2018 a success. It’s been a productive, fun, glorious time, and I’m going to miss it.
Same time next year.
Writing Retreat 2018: The Weekend

Friday
The neighbours started showing up at their cabins on Friday. After having the run of the place, I had to reacclimatize myself to people. It wasn’t easy. (If I used emoji on this blog, there would be a winky face right here.)
The family to the north is having Hydro-related issues (the short version is they have no electricity, and probably won’t till at least Monday). Ed, who owns the cabin where I live, let them run a couple extension cords from his outside plug so they could have refrigeration. In return, they’ve turned on their wifi and gave me the password. So now I can post without having to go down to the coffee shop in town (not that that was any great hardship).
I gave myself Friday off from writing, but I still did a bunch of writing-related business: I read out on the deck, I checked in on the status of “Me and the Bee” with the markets that have had it since February (one rejection, damn it, and one hasn’t yet replied) and did some research on The Submission Grinder, looking for a possible home for it. I’m starting to think I might just have to publish it here and be done, but I’ll wait a while longer.
In the evening I headed out to do some star-trail photography, but got about ten minutes out and the clouds rolled in, so I returned to the cabin and went to bed instead.
Saturday
Saturday I finally got out onto the deck to do some writing. It was pretty nice, though it’s a little annoying having to shut my laptop down completely to move it from one plug to another (the battery’s shot, so it’s just the way it is).
I did my 1,250 words, then took a drive to Shilo with Kathleen and a couple others, where we served as non-skating officials (or “flamingoes”, thanks to the pink shirts we were given to wear) at Scarlet Fever’s decisive victory over a Winnipeg roller-derby team whose name, sorry to say, eludes me at the moment.
It was about midnight when we left the after-party (first in last out, woo), and then I hemmed and hawed about whether I’d go back to the cabin or sleep at home. In the end, the cloudless night convinced me, and I managed to get the photo above (star trails over a pond and canola field, just north of Minnedosa). It was 3 AM by the time I got to bed.
Sunday
And now here I am, out on the deck again, writing this post. Once it’s done, I’ll do my 1,250 words, and then I guess pack everything up and head home.
Thanks, Karen and Ed, for the use of the cabin. I really appreciate it.
Thanks, Minnedosa. It’s been great. Same time next year?
Writing Retreat, 2018: Tuesday–Thursday

Tuesday and Wednesday were a lot like Monday, except I didn’t set my alarm for 2:30 AM either day.
Thursday
I got up, wrote, read, wrote some more, then headed to Winnipeg, to see my friend Chadwick Ginther launch his new novel, Graveyard Mind, at McNally Robinson.

On my way, I happened upon a lovely field of sunflowers, so I stopped for a few photos. None of them turned out, because I neglected to turn on the autofocus on my lens. But that’s OK, because I went back today (Friday) to scout the spot for a possible round of star trails later tonight, and I got this photo:

And then, after visiting with some friends in Winnipeg (thanks for the iced tea, Mike & Michelle!), I stopped in at the abandoned house near Erickson, and got about a half-hour’s worth of star trails.

It was about 2:30 AM when I got back to the cabin (hmm, I seem to have an affinity for that time…), so I started the star-trail GIMP plugin whose eventual output you see above, then went to bed.