More Snowflake

Done sec­tions 16 so far, which means I now have a nice, sol­id, 4½-page syn­op­sis of the action. It seems to be rel­a­tive­ly coher­ent. Next time I do nano, I’ll spend Octo­ber doing this, I think.

(Assum­ing that I ever need to do nano again. I’m hop­ing to end up with some­thing pub­lish­able, sal­able, when all this is done.)