New progress

Been a while. Oops, my fault.

There’s some new ideas for Across a Wound­ed Land, includ­ing some par­al­lels between Green’s behav­iour and Leonid’s — Green does­n’t aban­don Leonid, though he eas­i­ly could, when the snake bites him. Thus, when Leonid has a chance to be reunit­ed with Diana ear­ly, he choos­es to go back and assist Green.

Also, there’s now a snake appear­ing ear­li­er on in the tale.

I’ve been work­ing on it while I’m off for the hol­i­days (regret­tably not as much as I should), and it’s com­ing along fair­ly well. In fact, once this post is done, I’m going back to it.

Word count: 9700 so far.